I hated this layout when I began working on it. I didn't like the feel of it, then I journaled directly on the layout and disliked that as well. So. I left the page on my scrap table for a couple of days and sat down to figure out what I needed to do.
I covered up the journaling with more Gesso and a doily. Then added layers with the tag and chevron bag. When working with the title, an idea struck: have multiple perspectives of journaling from visiting family members (who were entertaining the girl so I could craft).
This was when from one of my least favorite pages to a favorite in minutes. I love having her grandparent's, a great grandma, and Ry's journaling in addition to mine in the bag.